Sunday, July 9, 2006

O Loud And Silent Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon exploded
over our hill tonight

and quickly floated
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Max Reif
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Sue Ann Simar 18 April 2007

I like dramatic titles like this. The image of the moon and the character of Silence-! yes! , 'all you'll ever want to know'.

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Dan Tharp 23 July 2006

only those listening will ever hear the shout of silence! dan

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Joseph Daly 10 July 2006

This is great Max. It seems like you are taking a new direction but your imagery is still great and this one, forefills waht a poem should.

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Theorem Thetruthserum 10 July 2006

Great poem...I agree loud is not only defined by the guidelines of sound.

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