The moon exploded
over our hill tonight
and quickly floated
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This is great Max. It seems like you are taking a new direction but your imagery is still great and this one, forefills waht a poem should.
Great poem...I agree loud is not only defined by the guidelines of sound.
I like dramatic titles like this. The image of the moon and the character of Silence-! yes! , 'all you'll ever want to know'.