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Very beautiful poem.....a class one...desire is beautiful that is when we wish to be free...and this wish gives poetry...... No desire no poetry....Stiil it is the cause of bondage....thanks

.........when will my desire / be done never till I live / then someone will kiss me as I close my eyes / so never despise.... //.... Amazing piece of poetry and a bitter truth of life. Kaifi Azmi, an eminent Urdu poet, says: There is no end to a man''s desires. Even after getting a shroud to cover his dead body, he craves for a piece of land for his grave.

when will my desire / be done never till I live / then someone will kiss me as I close my eyes / so never despise.... //.... Amazing piece of poetry and a bitter truth of life. Kaifi Azmi, an eminent Urdu poet, says: There is no end to a man''s desires. Even after getting a shroud to cover his dead body, he craves for a piece of land for his grave.

when will my desire / be done never till I live / then someone will kiss me as I close my eyes / so never despise.... //.... Amazing piece of poetry and a bitter truth of life. Kaifi Azmi, an eminent Urdu poet, says: There is no end to a man's desires. Even after getting a shroud to cover his dead body, he craves for a piece of land for his grave.

Once my girl friend wrote, Thou art my unattainable star, Oh! my Sun. so is our desires insatiable. Your poem reminds me of that.Thank you.

Desire is the cause of all sorrows! A beautiful poem with a precise theme! Well penned my friend....10