O Lord Up There Make Me Happy Poem by me poet yeps poet

O Lord Up There Make Me Happy

Rating: 5.0


All must keep hoping
'coz dreams
will never be fulfilled

more will add on still
like man's greed

we want this and that
every day

come some one kiss me
I say

but all shun

when will my desire
be done

never till I live
then someone will kiss me

as I close my eyes
so never despise

RISE you ALL already are
above sky high
how more further do you desire

to fly about the never ending sky
high
PH WHY?

Friday, December 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: design,desire,friend,greed,greenery day,greetings,hope,hubby,man,poet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2018

Desire is the cause of all sorrows! A beautiful poem with a precise theme! Well penned my friend....10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 December 2018

SO KIND OF YOU sir I JUST read PG 's poem on you lovely 'twas I endorsed it

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Prabir Gayen 31 December 2018

Very beautiful poem.....a class one...desire is beautiful that is when we wish to be free...and this wish gives poetry...... No desire no poetry....Stiil it is the cause of bondage....thanks

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 December 2018

.........when will my desire / be done never till I live / then someone will kiss me as I close my eyes / so never despise.... //.... Amazing piece of poetry and a bitter truth of life. Kaifi Azmi, an eminent Urdu poet, says: There is no end to a man''s desires. Even after getting a shroud to cover his dead body, he craves for a piece of land for his grave.

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opoet me poet 30 December 2018

when will my desire / be done never till I live / then someone will kiss me as I close my eyes / so never despise.... //.... Amazing piece of poetry and a bitter truth of life. Kaifi Azmi, an eminent Urdu poet, says: There is no end to a man''s desires. Even after getting a shroud to cover his dead body, he craves for a piece of land for his grave.

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Rajnish Manga 30 December 2018

when will my desire / be done never till I live / then someone will kiss me as I close my eyes / so never despise.... //.... Amazing piece of poetry and a bitter truth of life. Kaifi Azmi, an eminent Urdu poet, says: There is no end to a man's desires. Even after getting a shroud to cover his dead body, he craves for a piece of land for his grave.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 21 December 2018

Once my girl friend wrote, Thou art my unattainable star, Oh! my Sun. so is our desires insatiable. Your poem reminds me of that.Thank you.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 December 2018

it makes any poet feel elated hopefully not bloated send her a note you still love her and remembered send my poetry to her she will return the pleasure

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