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O Life, Test Me Not Comments

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O Life, test me not with the love
This mortal body is perishable
And my love is immortal
It is a divine flame, which no wind can blow
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M. Asim Nehal
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M Asim Nehal 28 September 2018

THANKS TO ONE AND ALL............

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 05 January 2018

A good philosophical poem.

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Mihaela Pirjol 04 January 2018

I very much like the repetition at the beginning of each stanza; it gives depth to your words.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 January 2018

A great spiritual write encouraging us to have a firm determination and courage to face God.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2018

Facing the ways of life! ! Living on earth! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2018

The law of this nature! ! Thanks for your comment on my poem.

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