Monday, August 27, 2012

O Lately I Did Dream Of You Comments

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O lately I did dream of you
Sweet love, above all earthly things
How gently you did carry me
Upon your dazzling snow-white wings
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Valerie Dohren
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Sina Farajzadeh 09 September 2012

Good poem. With different and exciting ideas. Specially love, and the mortal sins that you mentioned. Liked. Thanks.

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Alexander Mcneill 31 August 2012

Hi Valerie, just letting you know how much i enjoyed this poem, especially your use of language, and theme... and understanding of the greatest love. thanks Alex.

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Joseph Anderson 29 August 2012

It appears that you have found an even better muse and you shall fly to greater heights. Write on and on

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Dave Walker 29 August 2012

A very beautiful poem as always.

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Danny Draper 27 August 2012

Ah to love without its dark proclivities that bruise and foul, twist and bend, but elated release by their disposal when united souls ascend. A beautiful poem with a great concluding truth.

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Baker Garrison 27 August 2012

Well done, this is a good poem.

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Heather Wilson 27 August 2012

A beautiful poem, I loved the last verse, a wonderful write.

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Neela Nath Das 27 August 2012

Dear Val, another dreamy island of love you have created.Really, loved this stupendous poem.10+++

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Valsa George 27 August 2012

Just Beautifuuuuuuul! ! ! !

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 27 August 2012

nice rhyming....good expression...

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