O lately I did dream of you
Sweet love, above all earthly things
How gently you did carry me
Upon your dazzling snow-white wings
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Hi Valerie, just letting you know how much i enjoyed this poem, especially your use of language, and theme... and understanding of the greatest love. thanks Alex.
It appears that you have found an even better muse and you shall fly to greater heights. Write on and on
Ah to love without its dark proclivities that bruise and foul, twist and bend, but elated release by their disposal when united souls ascend. A beautiful poem with a great concluding truth.
A beautiful poem, I loved the last verse, a wonderful write.
Dear Val, another dreamy island of love you have created.Really, loved this stupendous poem.10+++
Good poem. With different and exciting ideas. Specially love, and the mortal sins that you mentioned. Liked. Thanks.