Monday, February 23, 2009

O Lasting Love That Knows No Bounds Comments

Rating: 4.8

O lasting love that knows no bounds
Why do you never come to me?
To spare my from these lonely days
So bitter and so cold,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Bonnie Collins 13 April 2009

This is very touching and written with many depths of emotions.. The way you presented this with such a sad tone, but none the less, a true one..... Everyone needs Lasting Love... Excellent......

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 March 2009

Longing for lasting love, sadness and lyrics have merged into beauty of this poem. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 February 2009

The poem has lyrical beauty.......I read it in one stretch. Might have sung it in mind. Beautiful Andrew......all poets cannot write love poetry as well as you do.

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Andrew Your emotion pulled at my heart strings. This lament is beautifully constructed as are all your poems. You are written straight from your heart and with your skill as well, it is powerful work. Karin Anderson

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Tsira Goge 24 February 2009

So all alone I face my fears And yet no courage I possess, My will grows ever weaker now I wish that I was strong.' .................................................. Andrew, Pleasantly when you listen such to a word-secretly.... As self-tortures enamoured the person.... What good sad poems...10..... Best wishes, Tsira

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Lynda Robson 23 February 2009

Your poetry is a joy to read Andy, love will come in its own time, beautiful words woven with wistful longing, 10+++ Lynda xxx

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Ramesh T A 23 February 2009

Indeed love has become rare in the world due to materialism which makes anyone as you write poem on love! I think if money can buy love perhaps it will be easily available, friend! Or we have to find a way to create a world where love prevails everywhere!

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Mohammed Albalushi 23 February 2009

Then every day would be the spring, true, nice poem

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