Wednesday, July 16, 2014

O' Journal, My Journal Comments

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O' Journal, My Journal.
A friend you are, my best.
When I'm upset, you kill my stress,
To you I can confess.
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Malik-seven Navarre
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Cainneach Rua 10 July 2025

The notion that a journal or diary is like a mother who provides comfort and a safe haven to express our sorrows or the toils of life is very fitting

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Roseann Shawiak 02 September 2015

Definitely love this poem! Can identify with feeling anger and rage at times, wanting to run, scream or hide from life. Yet after writing in a poetry journal, like you have stated, problems cease and we're at peace. Wonderful imagery, emotion and feelings! Felt emotions intensely and vibrantly for sure. Your rhythm is impeccable, great poem! I definitely like your style, please keep writing, you are very good at expressing your feelings poetically. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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