Friday, November 29, 2013

O Inventions! Comments

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WE are searching life in Mars and on other planets
I am worried; life in danger here in this earth
We are breaking the fence for our own silly mirth
Inventions are now a dagger to make suicide
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Khairul Ahsan 18 December 2013

You have raised a pertinent question. 'Tell me what we have done for poverty and peace? Invented more for destruction; peace and humanity' A good question and a good answer. 'O Inventions! You are killing the poetry' True.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 November 2013

There are many things to be done on this earth. First win at home before going beyond. Nice message through the poem. Thank you.

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