O Heart...Please Stop Beat.... Comments

a very heartfelt write..touching lines are sad..yet so sweet... a gentle a caress to anyone's heart... so expressive... 10++++ lovelots, Maia

a heartfelt write...beautiful

this is nicely done..don't let your heart stop beating for it will cause death... stars are there to show the brightest moon clouds uncover the rays of the sun oceans never stop giving waves as pearly gates open underworlds... your work is highly appreciated as i read, my smiles grow within a very smart and sweet lines hope ur njoying writing this..lav this

''so...please heart.. please my heart... stop beat... i can`t bear all those beats...'' lovely poem, Hazem, .10+++++

Oh! I feel every words flowing into this page...so heartfelt my friend...I love it! ! ! Thanks.........