O Great God! Comments

I had to read and reread this several times. I think this is among your best work. There is a lesson about true balance- a universal balance- placed so perfectly in this verse.

O Great God! treat this person Who loves you and love others To let air filled with hope and peace

An appeal made in total submission to God for the manifestation of His presence in adversity, nicely brought with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing.

A lot of antagonistic forces are there in life! Hills and valleys stay together as abundance and poverty co habit! Only God can balance these paradoxical forces! Profound thoughts!

you put a lot of thought into the structure of this poem and it paid off- - the poem is simple yet complex, harsh but lovely, but always faithful. Great write.

God is great. He treats every thing as per his own will. We just can imagine n dream.10

a great poem about God. well versed,

A fine poem. I would change the last line to War's a solution! This the only line where clarity is lacking. Please write more for us. Always remember that your perspective is always your most valuable gift to the world. It shines through the frailty of our words...

Bringing the pitiful situations that may be going unnoticed. Great poem. Thank you.

antithesis is your effective way to communicate the message right to the readers!

A poetic great supplication. U entreat God in such a fine way, was nice readin dis one. Bhaaai Shukriya.

Great job you have done poet with Greatest one. Cheers,10+++

well you know Ali the Son of Adam..I mean Adamson....Yeats in his poem Second Coming says 'That twenty centuries of stony sleep Were vexed to nightmare by a rocking cradle, And what rough beast, its hour come round at last, Slouches towards Bethlehem to be born? ' see this says the most holy city in the world is going to be attacked by 'sphinx'....so i hope things will realy get better...cause world has become a one big battlefield..anyway war in Sri Lanka is finaly over though..... nice one adam 10++

How do you speek of war-ism of man and GOD? Is that not the 'eye for an eye' in the old testement? You have not lost me yet, but your are treading on shifting sands

Nice prayer in a nice poetic form. 10 with pleasure.

ADAMSON hav firm faith in Allah.

what a genuine and beautiful write this is..amazing poem!

what a beautiful write.............well thought out and well penned

Great job is done, lovely poem. Added 10 to it.

O Great God! Treat those moments... Let everyone here have a heart and soul and thinking of Mohammed Ali then what a wonderful place this earth will be be It will be a paradise on Earth. nice poem dear Ali surely -10 anjali