O Great God! Treat those moments...
A man laughs when...
eyes filled with tears! !
O Great God! Treat those moments...
A man feels fear when...
another is there! !
O Great God! Treat those moments...
A man eats when...
another sweats! !
O Great God! Treat those moments...
To beat his hunger...
when man eats water! !
O Great God! Treat those moments...
No tears to weep when...
pain is deep! !
O Great God! Treat those moments...
When he dies...
to keep me alive! !
O Great God! Treat those moments...
When a man reasons...
to adopt war-ism! !
A fine poem. I would change the last line to War's a solution! This the only line where clarity is lacking. Please write more for us. Always remember that your perspective is always your most valuable gift to the world. It shines through the frailty of our words...
Bringing the pitiful situations that may be going unnoticed. Great poem. Thank you.
antithesis is your effective way to communicate the message right to the readers!
I had to read and reread this several times. I think this is among your best work. There is a lesson about true balance- a universal balance- placed so perfectly in this verse.
O Great God! treat this person Who loves you and love others To let air filled with hope and peace
An appeal made in total submission to God for the manifestation of His presence in adversity, nicely brought with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing.
A lot of antagonistic forces are there in life! Hills and valleys stay together as abundance and poverty co habit! Only God can balance these paradoxical forces! Profound thoughts!
you put a lot of thought into the structure of this poem and it paid off- - the poem is simple yet complex, harsh but lovely, but always faithful. Great write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
God is great. He treats every thing as per his own will. We just can imagine n dream.10