Monday, April 27, 2009

O Fire! Comments

Rating: 5.0

O Fire God,
Mankind’s Lord,
Upon the earth
From the sky you board.
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C. P. Sharma
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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

Brilliant job is done, love it 10++

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Aleisha Luyt 11 May 2009

very well written i give it a 7 because 7 is my highest score. please read my new poem called Save The Earth. keep writting

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Akram Saqib 11 May 2009

good poem the worship of fire is evident and the complete description beggars description

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 May 2009

very excellent and amazing! ! ! like Rossini Operas on poetry.

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i c the fire on this poem and it is burning brightly! brilliant work!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 May 2009

Legendary work,10++

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Mamta Agarwal 06 May 2009

A brilliant penning, a great tribute 10 Mamta

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Ency Bearis 06 May 2009

A brilliant write..a classic poem...nice to read...10

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Omar Ibrahim 01 May 2009

i really enjoyed reading this poem.....10++++for you

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 April 2009

The fire power of ancient God! ! Great writes Sharma!

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Anjali Sinha 29 April 2009

wow extolling the virtues of Agni +10 anjali

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Deepti Agarwal 28 April 2009

what a beauty.... I bow my head in honour of 'Fire'..

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an excellent write full of wisdom...the purity of fire man cannot tamper with

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rago rago 27 April 2009

Fire remains essence of life........out of five puda`s the fire got importnce in all occasions. Fire for knowledge, work, desire to live, fire to attain the goal.......... Just you have depicted the clear picture of the fire. The essence of poem really great.

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Chitra - 27 April 2009

a profound description of the traits of supercharged element of fire

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Joseph Poewhit 27 April 2009

Has a chanting flow to it almost prayer like

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

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