O Fire God,
Mankind’s Lord,
Upon the earth
From the sky you board.
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very well written i give it a 7 because 7 is my highest score. please read my new poem called Save The Earth. keep writting
good poem the worship of fire is evident and the complete description beggars description
i c the fire on this poem and it is burning brightly! brilliant work!
an excellent write full of wisdom...the purity of fire man cannot tamper with
Fire remains essence of life........out of five puda`s the fire got importnce in all occasions. Fire for knowledge, work, desire to live, fire to attain the goal.......... Just you have depicted the clear picture of the fire. The essence of poem really great.
a profound description of the traits of supercharged element of fire
Brilliant job is done, love it 10++