Sunday, November 18, 2007

O Drowning Souls! Comments

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We reach, reach, reach...
Our fingertips can almost touch
the surface of the water's end
They're yearning to feel the sky
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Yiling Ding
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Patrick McFarland 06 December 2007

Wow! Truly amazing poetry especially for one so young. Unsurpassed vision with zero waste of words. You should be doing this professionally.

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