O Demon, Do Not Rise From My Body Comments

O Demon, come to the terms with me Allow my soul to teach you the lessons Of patience, brotherhood and serenity At least, this world will be heaven for you.

Beautifully conceived. We all are fighting our demons. A thoughtful, philosophical write.

Deeply powerful thoughts and sentiments! .. That touches heart and soul! .. Again ever so movingly and beautifully expressed! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

O Demon, come to the terms with me Allow my soul to teach you the lessons Of patience, brotherhood and serenity At least, this world will be heaven for you......so touching and impressive with nice theme. Let's hope patience, brotherhood and serenity. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

Tremendous poem, my friend! I'm enchanted!