Tuesday, December 31, 2019

O Dear! New Year! Comments

Rating: 4.6

O dear! New year!
Bringing some fortunes and delights?
For poor fellowmen or they will continue
With their same pains and plights.
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Zulfiqar Ali Bhatti
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Jazib Kamalvi 11 February 2020

Such a nice poem, Zulfiqar. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Sarah Shahzad 02 February 2020

Congratulations..! well this is such a powerful peace to read, I really like it..! Keep it up...! :)

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Chima Ononogbu 02 February 2020

So painful to see little ones scrambling for food, even leftovers discarded and toxic. Thanks for throwing a poetic light on this.

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Shaun Cronick 02 February 2020

What can one say that hasn't been said already your poem and picture are worth more than a thousand words Zulfiqar. The warmest salutations to your good self. May God Bless and Keep you and the loved ones around you. And for everyone in life. Take care Zulfiqar.

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Chinedu Dike 02 February 2020

A concise piece of poetry with touching expressions, accompanied with a heartrending picture. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Bhatti.

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Rini Shibu 02 February 2020

Congratulations for poem of the day, a heart touching poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 February 2020

O dear! New year! Bringing some fortunes and delights? For poor fellowmen or they will continue With their same pains and plights. beautiful poem. thank u for the graphic which makes us think. tony

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Rajnish Manga 02 February 2020

For poor fellowmen.. same pains and plights. Have some healing for their wounds? .... //.... On the eve of New year, this socially relevant poem seeks to question the discrimination meted out to the poorest sections of the society. Is their any hope for them in the coming year? Congrats & Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 February 2020

We wish for our friends relatives happy and prosperous new year. The poet wishes for the alleviation of abject poverty. Feelingly writ. And congrats for POD

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 February 2020

A touching poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece....10*+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2020

Pains and plights of poverty! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 February 2020

heart touching picture// well written

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 February 2020

we human still inhuman our skyscraper building splendid celebration party food wastage in royal bin all rapturous dissipated mind make us happy make us unconscious make us beastly heroic killer mind! New Year comes and goes we make resolute we forget everything we are same in our squandering life they are same in there penury life no change; no fate comes to change them cause our inhumanity! !

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