Tuesday, July 2, 2013

O'Carry Me To Distant Shores... Comments

Rating: 4.3

O’ carry me to distant shores
To a place so far away…
On the wings of love, up in the sky
To find my childhood days…
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Meena Mustafa
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Payal Parande 29 August 2013

Oh how lovely and beautiful we all get inspired by Valarie ma'am's poem....bravo ma'am it was breathtaking

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Valerie Dohren 07 July 2013

A lovely tribute to your parents Meena. I am pleased you were inspired to write this poem, well done.

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Ketan Hukare 06 July 2013

WOW! ! ! Your poem shows that you really crave for your lost but beautiful childhood. Very well expressed. My vote is 10

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Marcus Mckinley 03 July 2013

if we could all recapture our youth. back before we really knew how things worked in this world. life would be a lot more enjoyable. nice write

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