Wednesday, September 13, 2006

(o) 12 (Bilingual) Ek Guzaarish/One Request Comments

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Aaj dabe paanv hi chalna...
Mera dil kuch bikhra hua hai,
Kahin kuchal naa jaaye
...
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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M Asim Nehal 26 February 2019

Wah wah......kya baat hai.

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Ruby Root 13 September 2006

Hi Tranquil, I hope your fine and it's just a poem. Excellent poem. Take care.

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Catastrophe King 13 September 2006

Aaj merey aankhon ko rok lo Kahin bekaar beh na jaaye Mera dil pighal raha hai..... TO...... too good!

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Preeti - is here! 13 September 2006

aaj kuch dabey paav chalna aaj dil shant aur sthir hai kahin toofan na aa gaye. Loved this 3 line poem! Preets

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