Wisps of clouds melt
Like vanilla ice cream
Into Nuvole Bianche.
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2) But, I believe you need to be more careful in choosing images. Eg. " The sea ebbing and flowing "… You know well that SEA does not FLOW… and never does it ‘ebb and flow'….
Congratulations to the poet, on this poem being selected POEM OF THE DAY. All the best, dear poet.
Humorous opening lines appreciated. Thank you.