Monday, October 30, 2023

Nuvole Bianche Comments

Rating: 4.8

Wisps of clouds melt
Like vanilla ice cream
Into Nuvole Bianche.
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Inked Solace
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Zeh SheZ 22 November 2023

Humorous opening lines appreciated. Thank you.

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2) But, I believe you need to be more careful in choosing images. Eg. " The sea ebbing and flowing "… You know well that SEA does not FLOW… and never does it ‘ebb and flow'….

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Congratulations to the poet, on this poem being selected POEM OF THE DAY. All the best, dear poet.

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