Thursday, August 30, 2012

Nurturing Progeny Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fondest memories
Must be treasured in the home
Where love, peace and joy
Inhabits in every heart,
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Helaman Del Castillo
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 01 September 2012

i like free verse poems but on this one, i especially like the last line.. vanishing melancholy.. as if in a painting, the final touch has made all the difference.. nice.. keep writing.

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