Monday, November 14, 2016

Nurture Me Comments

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Water me with your sympathy
And buds will appear on my vine.
Shine on my with your buoyancy
And my tendrils begin to unwind.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 14 November 2016

Nice metaphor there. I like the way you put the life of an individual as a plant. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

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Suzanne Hayasaki 14 November 2016

glad you liked it enough to comment!

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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