Saturday, September 30, 2006

Nursery Rhyme Comments

Rating: 5.0

People on my left and right
Laughing with all mirth and might
Leave in me a life delight
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prasanna kumari
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 25 October 2008

I have to agree with my friend, Tara...this is a fine rhymer, indeed....Solid Penning, Prasanna. ___ FjR ****

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Risha : Ahmed 01 January 2008

Prasanna aunty....This one is a lovely poem and what great rhyming. Loved it.

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June30 Tara 01 February 2007

It’s a fabulous poem….and what a great rhyming… love, Tara

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Preeti - is here! 05 October 2006

The most striking thing about the poem is the rhyme, brilliant! and the message was great too. Preets

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Risha : Ahmed 30 September 2006

This is such a wonderful poem. You are great at rhyming too. Please add me as your fan.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 30 September 2006

A rhyme you set out Tto compose, and a rhyme is what you so composed.... Commendably structured and free-flowing....a fine write, Prasanna... '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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