Rod
a single point of penetration
this virgin skull
now wrapped around it's pain
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ohh..but oh so wow.. I have never had something described so vividly yet still be so..nasty without going over the top..
Traumatic - I'll see nurses through different eyes, admit the writing is good in all it's gory brilliance.
hahaa i died when i saw the title but when i wrote it i was amazed by your attention to detail.bravo! ! !