Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Numbness Comments

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If you are really gone from me
Then that explains the shadows
That form in the corners of me
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Fiona Davidson
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Sue Sie 05 November 2009

Full of utter emotion straight from the heart...an excellent verse

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maggie murray 03 November 2009

superb Fi and straight from the heart, I feel your pain...take care now..Maggie

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Fay Slimm 03 November 2009

Perfectly balanced this piece Fi.... and sadly toned too - - a 10 and more from Fay

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Carol Gall 03 November 2009

be at one with your sadness but do not stay linger too long

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