Numbers Comments

this is absolultly an amazing subject and an amazing poem on it. I loved every word the flow was amazing and the words poerful. Thank you for sharing. yours truly

Numbers is a brilliant subject for a poem and there are some excellent ideas and quite poetically expressed lines, particularly in the last stanza. I wonder though about the line 'the chef cooked this too mild' (apart from the bad grammar, it seems out of context somehow) . Nonetheless, the poem shows a originality and flair and I encourage you to read and write more. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

amazing write as always. read it a few times over and really enjoyed. keep writing :) a ten from me