Monday, January 25, 2010

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one, two, three and four,
five's got six, but seven wants more.
Eight, nine and ten,
want eleven to start all over again.
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D.A. Woods
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Hussein Ahmed 25 January 2010

Entertaining poem. I like the way the numbers are personified and the wordplay used. This is an interesting concept that I think should be further explored. Nice Work =) .

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