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Loved the way you talked about the separation, the fruitless longing….

Passions boil... passions cool... good expression, though sad... Terry

In a few lines, you have depicted the unexpected cooling down of a warm relationship! Your stoic acceptance of it makes the poem specially charming! Thanks for this great share! !

I loved this fantastic poem and can relate to it perfectly right at the moment...unfortunately.....but, as we know, life goes on, and we do too. Thanks for putting my emotions into words here. Excellent!

nice poem..ladden with emotions

No matter whar young Ruby.. your writing is perfect... flawless... thankyou

I loved it, very smooth and go line by line like there's no way to stop me from feel it! great! _Soul

Very poignant, and cleverly written poem - you make the point well.

I hope in times to come you will get to meet your friend soon.Splendid write so touching!

LOVE this one. Get out of my head. Or stay, because that's what good writers do. Express relatable thoughts very well. Thanks for sharing. I did not disappear From the world you filled For me. I have not changed From the day you thought Me perfect. Those are my favorite lines.

Ah no dis is bittersweet, ofcourse evryone remains d same yet ingrates end up takin them forgranted. Very very nice poem dat made me sigh.

Don't really know what to write. Love to know where this one came from! Very powerful little write!

Beautiful sorrow. Love the last 5 lines.