Number 6 (Tanka) Comments
smouldering fire—
an old chimney on the roof
shaped as number six
'Dancing with tears in my eyes'
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Excellent piece of work! Even a painter would have failed to render this image so well!
Smouldering memories like a smouldering fire, the essence of the past as emotions spill as tears, beautifully written!
The pain cuts through all the lines from first to last! Very touching.......!
Dancing with tears in my eyes the song says in the background.....so touching. A beautiful Tanka nicely executed.10
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7/28/2025 2:16:18 PM # 1.0.0
Memories of the past must be lingering in the mind, a nice tanka...10+++