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Cagayan de Oro, Philippines
Thursday, March 12, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

Your light faded in the distance
your left to not exist
my starry night turn black
the air is not so crisp
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 March 2009

An emotional poem for emotionlessness. i'm swallowed in the darkness left to think these dreadful thoughts swirling through a haze of nothing actling like i had a shot no idea of how to feel from shock to deep sadness i'll give this night alone for tears then no more shall be shed These two stanzas are deep and sad......... deserves 10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Cagayan de Oro, Philippines
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