Sunday, June 27, 2010

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The blaring music acts to numb me,
Acts to the dissapearance of thoughts,
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Samantha Samis
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Jose Delosantos 11 July 2010

Wow This Poem Is Beautiful!

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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 10 July 2010

a very passionate write.... well expressed! ! ! ! Bleeding hearts; beating drums, How the sound moves me, Keep screaming into the mic, Play it louder Make me numb. i'm still picturing bleeding hearts, beating drums........... great write! ! ! ! keep it up! ! ! ! !

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Numb, music so loud, feels like your heart is going to jump out of your chest! Could feel the vibe as I was reading! Good one! ; D

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 June 2010

Bleeding hearts; beating drums, How the sound moves me, Keep screaming into the mic, Play it louder Make me numb. thinking of these lines now......... do not go after things because of peer pressure. go after what your hearts concern is. young days are really dangerous days. keep an eye on ur inner and happiness of your soul. thank you for sharing.

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