Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Nuggets Of Wisdom.No.9. On Sloth Comments

Rating: 4.8

With age comes Sloth
A companion to loathe
But sadly we hold him dear
And let him rule as our sire
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 18 September 2019

A brilliant poem! The first four lines are my favorite lines! Thanks dear madam for sharing..........10

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Mantu Mahakul 02 November 2015

A companion to loathe expresses wideness of hoe with amazing attitudes. Knowing life is not to rest. Wonderful sharing really.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 02 November 2015

Oh dear.... thanks for awakening my dormant mind. Perhaps i could earn a nugget if i sat with you for some tips on writing. Thank you. I liked the title very much.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 October 2015

In activity there is life. Inactivity leads us no where. Beautifully said.

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Sanjukta Nag 29 October 2015

Talking about laziness in swift rhyming words. Wonderful. Really enjoyed this nugget of wisdom.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2015

Sloth can dwindle the pgogress of life, wisely and nicely shared. - - - 10

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M Asim Nehal 28 October 2015

Wise words on laziness............It is the biggest enemy of work and creativity. Thanks much for sharing two wise poems.

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Kelly Kurt 28 October 2015

Well conceived and written. An enjoyable read

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Loke Kok Yee 28 October 2015

Very true it is the lazy that holding the rest back Thanks Valsa.-10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 October 2015

Company of sloth at any stage in life acts as an obstacle in achieving remarkable progress, materialistic or otherwise. Appreciate the nugget of wisdom. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 28 October 2015

Amazing reality check on sloth in our lives and its impact and how and why we should stem the rot. I quote: When the diligent will prosper / In course of time, the lazy will suffer

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