IF UNBRIDLED
Passion should be checked by reason
Without letting it grow into an obsession
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The wisdom embedded in this great poem must always be put to heart. Great metaphor and superb imagery to inculcate in the mind that passion must always be tempered with reason. Statistics show that one of the primary reasons of man's downfall is we let our passion rules our action. Beautifully crafted and well expressed write.
the young can survive a few falls but the old cannot and need to draw on their wisdom and experience Smooth flow and a great write-10
amazing rhyme and amazing analogy.. fantastic play of words on apt wisdom.. love it..10
A wise approach to life is there in your poem valsa ji, let me add a saying here: If passion drives you, let reason hold the reins.” – Benjamin Franklin,
good one...there has to be a balance maintained in every action we do....nice one mam
If left unbridled how passion grows into an obsession is very well brought out in your lovely rhyming, lilting poem, Valsa! EXcellent ! ! !
Passion should be checked by reason Without letting it grow into an obsession Golden words to follow. Thank you.
Very wise, one should always maintain a sense of proportion. Great Valsa.
makes me jealous over your lovely nature of writes And toss you down from your saddle To be trampled like a thing so frail n’ brittle! with much love this poem
Passion should be checked by reason Without letting it grow into an obsession Unless tempered by moderation It may develop into an agitation.....so touching and true. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Full stars.