Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Nuggets Of Wisdom.8. On Anger Comments

Rating: 5.0

‘Anger is one letter short of danger’
Our life, in many ways it can endanger
Indeed it is a great malaise
And it works in viscious ways
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Valsa George
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 September 2020

A beautifully crafted poem with great rhyme, nice flow and imbued with wisdom and insight. Yes, anger is one of the negative emotions that we must always abhor. A great poem that captures all the dangers of this negative and violent emotion. Liked the closure lines. Five Stars......and To my Poem List.

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Vaibhav Simha 06 May 2020

This practicality of this poem is abound in the present simulacrum of our lives. Anger has led humanity to wage wars over most trivial of things; the blood shed in these strained times can never be forgotten.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 October 2019

How brilliantly you have introspected and analyzed the chassis of anger! Your first line tells everything....‘Anger is one letter short of danger’. A wonderful poem carrying wisdom! Thanks dear madam for sharing......10

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 02 November 2015

Well expressed emotion. This negative emotion takes a lot from you. The composition is excellent.This is indeed a worthy nugget to earn and learn. Every line is significant. There is always something, that your intelligent mind can focus something to write. There is always a surprise element in your poems. I read two of the precious nuggets and they dazzled me (this nugget is beyond my reach very often)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 October 2015

Let loss of temper be temporary. Never forget to repair any damage caused by anger. Beautiful poem to read and follow.

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Sanjukta Nag 29 October 2015

All the aspects of anger are wisely revealed. And the last couplet is a valuable advice. Great write ma'am!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2015

Really anger steals all our energy and spoils all synergy. Well envisioned and beautifully composed. Thanks for sharing. - - - 10

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M Asim Nehal 28 October 2015

Anger management is an art and to use it by diverting to our benefit is another fine art, Very well written Madam, I liked it.

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Kelly Kurt 28 October 2015

We must control all of our emotions. Wonderful thoughts, Valsa. Thanks

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Jaishree Nair 28 October 2015

Anger - a destructive emotion which raises the adrenal level and deeds committed thus are likely to be repented later on.Another great write.Thanks for sharing

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Saheb Mohapatra 28 October 2015

yes rightly said......... anger is man's most dangerous foe......when we wash our hands in the stream of anger, our hands would never be clean but a permanent mark of grief would get nested on our hands............anger leads to the fatal diseases like envy, hostility, frustration, and even death.............................this poem has succeeded in drawing the clearest portrait of the devilish anger...........................very nice rhyme...........i bet this excellent masterpiece has taken birth in a flow from your mind...............................very nice work..................10 on 10..........you deserve it. thanks.

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Loke Kok Yee 28 October 2015

in anger many things are said and done which later we regret Thanks Vasa-10

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