Nuggets (Acrostic) Comments

our commercial ads look like female generation takes a necklace in the morning for breakfast, a gold chairn with earrings and few bangles for lunch and a couple of anklets wastelets for supper. and their male couterparts to any length to look ugly by daubing themselves witl all MNC filth on them. they way they use to get these is quite opposite to the way of real natural world. what is natural is right. when will we understand this? a small and telling write a like it. jaypee

Irony penned with skill and anger in this fine poem about the obscenity of power and wealth. Your final line, 'Spends life like a frozen vegetable! ' is superb! love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Nuggets: they would be not bad at all, if hold their natural substance. Here the bad is that many things are adulterated and occupy the place of the natural elements. Unluckily some people think they can't do without them.

Very true poem states a truth of greed. Great job!

Health is the most important thing in this life, wealth is no good to an ill man, good topic, 10 Lynda xx

Luxury, material pleasures and wealth have their own draw backs...which u have stated well.

very nice thoughts composed here. true in this selfish world no one thinks about others. we are all very busy with our wealth, authority and luxury. well written piece.

Spends life like a frozen vegetable! - What is terrific ending.... again a good write...

Wow sathya... An insightful piece exposing the narrow vision of human race... Beautifully and Truthfully written by a pure soul... I loved it...

And all the while he was writing his own epitaph... What a terrible pity. Very powerfully written. This one resonates. Kind regards, Sandra

another very deep and thought provoking write bhayya...10

that's life. as you sow so shall you reap. very well expressed.

a wonderful commentary indeed!