Sunday, February 10, 2008

“nude Descending A Staircase” Comments

Rating: 3.6

____nothing glamorous, a lady
_____ walking down the stairs
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Ben Gieske
COMMENTS
Sandra Martyres 25 September 2009

Another brilliant poetic depiction of a painting...I love the artistic form that you have used....

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Lillian Thomas 11 September 2009

great homage to Marcel Duchamp. It's not X.J. Kennedy, but you have a very fine piece here, I added it to my favorites.

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Ivor Hogg 21 August 2009

a recognition of a simple truth.

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Shashendra Amalshan 09 August 2009

You are a great artitist indeed.. this again is a very imaginative work of art.. good, something different... love shan

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 July 2009

You're so artistic and innovative in your works Ben.Woman descending a staircase, man ascends to their inner needs, to be honest.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 July 2009

weeeeeee! so much beauty here! remarkable! ....10+

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Amazing work Ben.! Both visually and verbally. Words walk where they are supposed to and I would say this is the most creative visual I have seen on Poemhunter yet. Excellent! 10 Karin Anderson

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Sathyanarayana M V S 19 May 2009

Another beautiful piece from a beautiful heart.......You painted as well as Marcel did.

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Meggie Gultiano 21 April 2009

a big, big applause, Sir Ben.This is stunningly creative and you are a real artist.I love the way you paint this, and the graphics.

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Great image very thought evoking! ! ! ! good form-a ten! ! !

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James Timothy Jarrett 04 January 2009

Ben, Love your staircase. Great poem with very evoking imagery.

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Ben, I say a touch of genius! Dorothy

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Reshma Ramesh 30 November 2008

well done...................great write! !

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Iohannes Silvaticus 17 November 2008

The increasing length of the caesuras attach a sense of anticipation to touch the divine. Excellent

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Elizabeth Emerick Wilholt 07 September 2008

Such clever use of form to create a full expression in this poem, and the lovely perception of the woman as divine beauty in motion.

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Will Barber 01 September 2008

Most inventive. Admirable. Wit, in its true sense. - Will

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Kesav Easwaran 11 August 2008

beauty in nudity and nudity in beauty...that is what poets and painters want to see...the poem laddering down just as the lady in Duchamp's painting...but the beauty inside the poem ladders up with its every step down line...10/10

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Luis Gil 20 July 2008

The artist wants to capture a meaningful image, it brings shape and content for us to decipher.

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Subbaraman N V 18 July 2008

I have not seen the painting! Yet I appreciate the beauty of the painting! Lovely poem!

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David Desantis 07 July 2008

i've seen the painting, wicked sweet...i love the adoration of women in this one, especially, she's the artist, and teacher etc etc.10/10

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