Whirlwind lifting shapeless seas
Frosted
Crashing
In hot breeze
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Brilliant capture, snap-shot lines deliver this piece in true poetic form, with the added bonus of first class imagery. A fan 10+
Cute, nicely done. I for one would like to be warned, Some things are better left covered, Tho my eyes are not virgin, Most of us look better..... under-cover. T
enjoying the creative style of your well chosen and effective descriptive verse such an economy of evocative language