Monday, April 13, 2009

Nude Beach Ahead Comments

Rating: 2.8

Whirlwind lifting shapeless seas
Frosted
Crashing
In hot breeze
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Barbara Attaway
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Barry A. Lanier 25 April 2009

enjoying the creative style of your well chosen and effective descriptive verse such an economy of evocative language

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~ Jon London ~ 13 April 2009

Brilliant capture, snap-shot lines deliver this piece in true poetic form, with the added bonus of first class imagery. A fan 10+

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Teresa Dearing 13 April 2009

Cute, nicely done. I for one would like to be warned, Some things are better left covered, Tho my eyes are not virgin, Most of us look better..... under-cover. T

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Barbara Attaway

Barbara Attaway

Beaumont, Texas, USA
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