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The mantra of Balance, sheds enlightenment on most all quandaries...Your depiction here, is impressive. ___ FjR ****

Hypocrisy and pain in life..made visible by good choice of words. Home is not a place external but a world within. Good one Prasanna.

hmmm.. the home of pain. Interesting! ! I like some of the words/lines you're used here Preets

the middle hangs invisible meaninglessness Near the middle sways saturated nothingness On the wall leans choking depression Frozen life sleeps on the floor the real hub of this painful mute......is not on a home....it hubbub our ''meaningless''...''choking depressions.....''. rages - poet endorse a great philosophy....