Wednesday, January 4, 2023

Nowhere Comments

Rating: 5.0

The hazy day has nothing to say
Biting cold is numbing my fingers
The traffic smoke feeds the vagueness
Till it becomes the only truth
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Nosheen Irfan
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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 January 2023

I had written here my comment, but nowhere to find, HOW is this possible, PH and Team?

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 January 2023

This is NOWHERE, but NOW HERE, right? Unique poem, by a unique personality, dear Nosheen and that's YOU! I always like your poems very much, to my Favourites and 5 Stars full Score

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 January 2023

And we go on, on and on.....we have a goal to reach the destination but the destination is unknown. Another fabulous poem from your amazing ink. Top score and to my favourite.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 07 January 2023

A silent journey. Nice imagery you bring

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 January 2023

This poem resonates with me. Darkness invades every corner even the mind. A well crafted write with superb imagery as always.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 January 2023

'Displacing the simplicity of soul' beautiful line from a wonderful poem.

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Anjandev Roy 06 January 2023

Not knowing where......significant......thanks for sharing.....

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M. Asim Nehal 05 January 2023

Same here, cloudy, raining and for everywhere......Waiting for sun to come out and shine.

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Phillip Nine Mafunga 05 January 2023

And we go on and on, in the end we blame the environment abd climate for our own aimlessness. All because of t

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When we are surrounded by hazy twilight, it is hard to find direction. But, we have to! Quite poignant poem. Top score for shaking my heart with the Nosheenic magic of words.

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Rob Lamberton 04 January 2023

A tragic day! 5 stars

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Maria Mitea 04 January 2023

Wonderful Work, Nosheen Irfan

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 January 2023

It's the same here in Toronto They predicting snow this week

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David Wood 04 January 2023

We are all drowning in constant rain here and dark clouds that hide the sun's warmth

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