Thursday, July 9, 2009

Nowhere Comments

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I had a dream in which I could fly
Taking off into flight without wondering why
I sailed through stars until I reached heaven
Then my alarm went off and it read seven
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Deborah Cromer
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Kafil Uddin Raihan 02 September 2009

Very imaginative and really nice.......

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Yelena M. 25 August 2009

Nowhere as everywhere..dream as reality and reality as dream, a beautiful story you tell here, Deborah, thanks for sharing with us. Yelena M.

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Piyush Sharma 21 July 2009

Very well written. In so simple words you convey subtle emotions. And the flow (the connecting events) in your poem is also very good. I liked your passion to live your dream. good work.

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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