in fake glory of a crystal bowl
the goldfish forgets the sea!
In cages, alone birds pray and sing
'God! Bring A delicate roommate for me! '
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A hardhitting great poem on tday's world! Pls coment my latest poem too.
a wonderful poem with the great idea, I like especially the opening verse, In faked glory.........the sea!
Oh, my gush! This is the most amazing poem I read in the last months. I really mean it. A big Wooooooo000000oooooooow. Jesus! How a great piece of poem it is. The ideas, the philosophy, the narration technique... All are perfect. Damn, I can't believe we have such great poets within country. I am just amazed. Thanks for sharing this. I'd be glad to see your comments on my poems too. Thanks
It is awesome! Always happy to read from you.