Friday, May 2, 2014

Now You See Them Now You..... Comments

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Never do I not want to be by myself when my sunshine has faded.
My ever after is my mind clever with thoughts of loving you.
In my life the heart burns at both ends of the colour spectrum and
catching flames while holding on tightly is what brings me to tears of joy and friendship of memories.
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Adeline Foster 02 May 2014

Hey that is a different twist on Edna St Vincent Millay's 'burning the candle at both ends'. I like the brighter concept of the colour spectrum, great idea. Adeline

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Jason Kenzie 02 May 2014

Thank You Colleen for your kind words

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Colleen Courtney 02 May 2014

A very beautiful poem! Well done!

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