Now You Are Both My Friend And Foe! Comments

You are infatuated with her. I pity you if you are handcuffed by her charms, then how can you write poems? Cheers!

Great job. Keep on writing!

apart froma jarring line My thought goes wild like a blue-film! a fine poem...musical keep goin... :) cheers

i m trying to find out foe in my life but i find no, no one is foe.if there is enmity there is some reason. nice poem

I could feel a beat as I read this. My head even started to nod. XD Wonderful job.

Nice poem dear. nice thought.