Monday, November 5, 2007

Now That You'Re Dead Comments

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Now that you're dead
Who will show me how to ride my bike?
Now that you're dead
Who will teach me how to mow the lawn?
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Matthew Soriano
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ngaio beck 27 February 2008

Nice work! Its' a gift to be able to write what you feel. Ngaio Beck

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Alisha Lonz 21 January 2008

i respect you for putting out such a personal piece of yourself for other people who know nothing about you to read. it shows that you are a stronger person than most.

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Matt, this is a poem everyone can relate to. Even though my father died when he was 70 and I was 39, there were still things that I needed, or perhaps, wanted him to teach me, maybe even if it was just how to be at 71 or 81, or 101. The lessons that he taught me up to then will always be with me and my son who adored my father. Nice work.

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Suicide King 09 January 2008

A great piece of affection and emotion.

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Riquetta Elliott 10 December 2007

Sad and grief but good poem though.

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