Now That You'E Gone Comments

Ah, finally you've grown up...all of us have passed through this stage...but you 'poemed' it naturally. And stay calm inside too.... Cheers. Subroto

Just keep writing my, friend. You can always revise them when some rhyme strikes you

that's very good keep it up.

Good self expressive poetry. Keep it up. I think my 'Love Affair' can help you a little. CP

it was really great keep it up

very nice.... keep up the good work 10/10 thanks for sharing.

very optimistic and refreshing. It is obvious that you put alot of effot and heart in such a poem. :)

it 's amazing it may takes the breath away with it delicacy