Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, May 5, 2012

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I know you rarely speak
But make me completely weak
When I rise to stick the stand
You refuse me and fail to understand
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Date & Time: 5/8/2012 9: 35: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 30991881 - Now quiet Member: The Seagull in D SkY Comment: Very nice thought.Another great work!

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aradhana verma very touchy sir but well written

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pallavi sharma gloomy oul as poet'' ''No more words now as he is now quiet.'' hmm... Nice one.6 minutes ago via mobile · Like

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aradhana verma very touchy sir but well written

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sky high what a sad poem....hey fly again why stuck on someone who's not available to you...

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Sarah Russell i love your poetry, and i truly hope you never cease to write. beautiful bluejay, as well.13 hours ago · Like · 1

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Gail Wolper A Kingfisher! In this country, they are always grey colored.2 hours ago · Like

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Efe Light Sakpere ?''Here lived a simple soul as poet'' ''No more words now as he is now quiet.'' hmm... Nice one.6 minutes ago via mobile · Like

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Manju Suri ?Hasmukh Amathalal A beautiful ode writ with sensitivity...I give you full credit for your sense of creativity...! ! ! about a minute ago · Like

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Neela Nath Das 08 May 2012

Very nice thought.Another great work!

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I know you rarely speak But make me completely weak When I rise to stick the stand You refuse me and fail to understand

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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