Sunday, April 11, 2010

Now Its True... Comments

Rating: 4.5

The Gun is Lying On The Table Thinking About My Life It Was Unstable
Flashbacks Running Through My Head So Fast Like Lead..
Childhood Memories Playing In the Dirt
Didnt Matter If We Got Dirty But We Still Got Hurt
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LC Jose Deluna
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Lekë Loshi 11 April 2010

I love the way you rhyme in this poem. The poem is very interesting and appealing. I was easily plugged into it.

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