Friday, October 5, 2012

Now Its In Front Of Me Comments

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still somewhere inside me.
there is a little like remaining
a new heartbeat came up
i got to know that i am still alive
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sagar patil.
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Stewart Gideon 04 December 2012

should I die or should I live a little sometimes in life we find ourselves contemplating something like this. Whatever happens, just keep finding a reason to live a little...just live anyway

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Rouge Groer 12 October 2012

its wonderful. i like the way you put your thoughts into words :))

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Shivani Misra 12 October 2012

I like it :) nice one. Waiting to read more. Thank u.

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Cierrah Smiles 09 October 2012

Everybody has chooses they must make... they face these choices and live with the outcome but either way you go you still must live with the choose... now its in front of me. should i do or should i live little.. should i kiss joys... or should i cry a little.. should i die or should i live little.. Are my fav. lines. I love this poem great work

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Lalit Kumar Deb 09 October 2012

At every turn in our lives we have to make a choice. What we are is the result of our past choices. At present the choice before us is either to look back and weep or to look forward and smile at the new horizons open for us. The first choice will make us philosopher- poets and the second will make you us optimist. Anyway nice poem.

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Unwritten Soul 09 October 2012

Good poem, you did a nice job here..what to face in front of you? ? i have a suggestion, try to learn by seeing a layer of water, a thin surface cover the ocean or the lake...a surface that facing air or liquid...you can decide to diffuse to be in the air or stay in the pool of water reservoir, there always a choice we need to take in this life sagar, each will cost you something, if you go to the air, you must lost the water, if you stay to the water then you can reach the sky and the air above...but now you are in a layer of water, decide what you want and whatever you decide it do it without regret, just try make it work and it will...thanks for inviting, keep writing_Soul

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Asif Andalib 07 October 2012

Life is mixture of sorrow and happiness so go ahead and live a long life. Good poem

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Payal Parande 06 October 2012

you want something everyday but you know when your heart wants something and i think you should always grab it cause today what matters no yesterday nor tomorrow............an amazing piece sir a heartfelt melody to ear love payal

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Words' Knight 05 October 2012

Smart way of expressing you feelings; and thoughts, nice writting go on man.

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Persian Khushi 05 October 2012

kiss joy of course! lovely write bhaiya :)

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Poetheart Morgan 05 October 2012

Please Sagar, life, kiss, joy and pain, all make part of ours lifes. Make a option for you love. Beautiful Poem. In War and love worth everything.Go ahead.

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Mg Confused 05 October 2012

u should have little... i think this question is now a days common for every person. nyc poem

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Neela Nath Das 05 October 2012

Dilemma of thought. What to do, to embrace new life or to stick to past grief--this is the thought, I think.Very nice.

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Lalit Kumar Deb 05 October 2012

In every moment of our lives we are called upon to make choices. What we are and what we stand for is the result of our choices. No repents. One has to take every day as it comes to him, but one has to plan for eternity forgetting the subtle and material things of life. Nice flow of thoughts.

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Indranil Bhaduri 05 October 2012

Very thoughtful piece...Liked it...

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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