Now It's Time To Prove Ourselves Comments

Beyond the ruins, a glorious castle awaits! This hope keeps us going ! Learning from our mistakes and adding to our stock of experience, let us get ready for a new morn! The repetition of lines adds to the musical effect of the poem! !

I see the pride and repetition adding emphasis....to the burning desire to progress....... stagnating in the secret recesses of the poetic heart.....

We should all strive to do something worthwhile, not just in this new year, but every new year. Fascinating write.

V nice write....yes theres still a lot left to do n dat time wil prove....gud1