Now Is All We've Got Comments

Time.....

Present is foundation of a hopeful future. Congrats!

O now! It disappears every nanosecond. However, the poem rests on the common assumption of the present. It carries time into a maleable state.

The poem draws a comparative study of relative time brilliantly. Dear friend Samuel, you're very promising but we expect more accuracy from you in future. Thank you very much for sharing your nice thought with us. Chandan

Oh dear, this poem has broken english so doesn't read right. Not very well put together but the thought in place is a very strong and pleasant. Congratulations on POTD

Poem with a profound message- 'But our present ours to craft'.

Make the most of each now.

Love will remember! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Please correct the following lines- - We use to have time as ours We have have ourselves

lovely note on life of love 10++++

a sorrowful poem yet finishing on a positive note? ...…………well written Samuel

through love if we craft our present well future definitely will come, great poem, congratulations, and thanks for sharing the poem with us, if you can manare time, please go through my poems

excellent comprehensive thought about life- Our future not ours to tell But our present ours to craft nice 10++++

Samuel, such a well crafted poem of the day.... congrats for being chosen..... big 10+++++