Wednesday, January 29, 2020

Now I Need To Pee Comments

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As I write this,
I'm a poorly man.
Try to make it rhyme,
Do the best I can.
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Shaun Cronick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 January 2020

A lovely well penned poem that many of us could relate to. We can feel your pain through this very vivid portrayal. Amazingly entertaining write too, Shaun. Beautifully written with great rhyme. Onto my Poem List.

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Shaun Cronick 29 January 2020

Thank you Rose Marie for your kind comment and I'll gladly swap this poem for any of the following: - Cough medicine/ expectorant, Paracetamol Endless Kleenex tissues Or 12 tons of Assam tea-bags. Thanks again Rose Marie and I'll try not to sneeze.

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