Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Now I Have Become Tired By (Mimi Mata) Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am tired...
Restlessly I go to where the rock cannot be unearthed
Where the root of the trees cannot splinter
Where the salt-like, metal smell of my being
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Ray Quesada 12 October 2012

I just have one question Mimi...why are you so good at writing poetry? :) What i really liked about this was the experience it evoked...most poets (like myself) always forget to use SMELL when describing things. you have a great way of stirring up this thing inside of me I sometimes call a soul. Namaste!

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